HP summury, analysis and feedback

1) Revision of Summary - HP

This is about the marketing campaign of HP. The reason why they began this campaign is that they wanted to get more consumers who would buy their products and use the web site to present their goals. After making the website, they hoped to earn money and that more people would use their products. According to this article, there is no doubt that HP is the biggest printer company in the world. However, Hewlett-Packard is beginning to start the marketing campaign to make people think about using their printers and ink more. HP saw the possibility of selling their products to people and It was successful. Even though they are at the top of the global printing market, they keep trying to appeal to consumers.

2) Individual Analysis -HP

I think that focusing on the online user is the only way to attract new consumers. Even though we can find printers everywhere and it is demonstrated that printers were one of the most important devices for people, people today do not use their printers extensively.and due to the fact that people will ride wave of the web.


3) What I learned about the weaknesses of my writing when I worked with a writing tutor.
Tutor said :
- Making grammer error (specially article and verve tense)
- Not choosing proper words.
- Not knowing what’s more common phrase.